I enjoyed reading this because I know it's true. Many people, the BTT included, are made fun of or have their reputations wasted because of some rumor that may or may not be true. Even if it is short, I think this is a brilliant idea to write about. The personal attachment that reader has in the story with Antonio, Francis, and Gilbert makes it seem more heartwarming. I would definitely love to read more about them once it is done. I'm also interested in how you would make them characterize themselves. Will they be depressed? Happy? Lonely? The cliffhanger was a mysterious touch that can lead up to something amazing. And I can feel it will be.
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